Intro and Methods
Introduction
Growing up,
children are often told the saying, “breakfast is the most important meal of
the day”. Over the years, this phrase has been largely emphasized within school
systems. In recent years, breakfast programs have been incorporated more into
schools nationwide so that all children have the chance to eat breakfast in the
morning. This is because studies have showed that there many positives to eating
a healthy breakfast. This includes reduced absenteeism, improved cognitive
performance and most importantly, increased academic grades and standardized
test scores (CDC 2014). Breakfast has also been proven to help with other
behavioral issues. Prior research showed that children who participate in the
breakfast programs at school have proved to have decreased anxiety, depression,
and hyper activity (Baildon 2016). Starting this habit of eating a healthy meal
before the start of the school day is crucial for children’s development later
in life. Picking this habit up young is going to benefit them in their later
years of school like high school and eventually college. Studies show that
eating breakfast before big exams and test make a difference. During his study
of the effect of breakfast on the performance of college students on biology
exams, George Phillips noted that “of those that had eaten breakfast, 72.7
percent received a “C” or better on the test” (Phillips 2005). Another study
reported that, “Research shows for the first time
that children are twice as likely to score higher than average marks in
assessments at 11 if they have started the day with a healthy breakfast” (Fleck
2015). These studies are providing evidence that there is a correlation between
a healthy breakfast and better grades. While there is research specific to test
scores, there hasn’t been much evidence to show if healthier breakfast correlates
to a higher GPA.
Methods
Participants
The participants in this study
included 31 people who were all in either high school or college. The wide age
range will show the difference between the two different age groups. This is
important because high school age group will show a better difference in scores
as most high school students are awake for breakfast. The class schedule for
college students range and many may not even be awake for that meal.
Procedures
In order to collect data, a
survey was conducted. This survey consisted of five different multiple-choice
questions which asked a variety of questions relating to how often they ate
breakfast, if their breakfast was healthy, what their current GPA is and average
test grade scores.
Your intro starts out good by introducing your topic and giving back group information, but I think you need to use more sources. I suggest splitting your intro into multiple different paragraphs and in those paragraphs talk about different research studies that have been done. Additionally you need to add a gap into your intro.
ReplyDeleteFor the methods section, your participants section is good, but for the procedure part add what questions you asked in your survey. Also add a heading labeled "analysis" that explains how you analyzed your data.