Strengths and Weaknesses

Paper 1
Strengths
- the intent citations followed the correct format
- easy to read
- APA format was good
Weaknesses
- was repitiive with some of their language
- did not have the best conclusion

Paper 2
Strengths
- good tone
- concise
Weaknesses 
- did not integrate the answers from the interview in fluently
- the language choice could have been more articulate
- did not use many reliable sources

Paper 3
Strengths
- good introduction 
- good structure
- references are recent 
Weaknesses
- word choice was advanced for the average reader

Paper 4
Strengths
- explains quotes
- introduction was thourough 
Weaknesses
- somewhat followed APA
- could have added more quotes
- too many long quotes

Paper 5
Strengths
-conclusion was to the point
Weaknesses
- some APA formatting mistakes

Paper 6
Strengths
- explained quotes and examples
- followed APA format
Weaknesses
- could have used more sources

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